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Emerald suns arise from sanguine sparks
As artificial gold prepares to heal
This road that has been ravaged countless marks
From miles and miles of twisted, marbled steel.

Aligned between soft strokes of endless white
That harmonize as silken thoughts go by,
Ebony wings begin to wrap the night
On dreams that bloom beyond suspended time.

Silence screams and sheathes its sound,
Behind these eyes that grow weary and wound.
©2006-2008 ~xhileno
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variation of a sonnet, it still has the same meter, but it's just missing a quattrain.

why do i always get inspired in cars?
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=TheRuneKeeper:iconTheRuneKeeper: Oct 9, 2006, 6:53:20 AM
I nothing about poetry, but it read well. I'm not even gonna sk what a quattrain is lol

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~xhileno:iconxhileno: Oct 9, 2006, 7:11:06 AM
hehehe, a quattrain is a 4 line stanza. a sonnet has 14 lines total. most of the time it's a set of 3 quattrains and a couplet (2 line stanza), making 14 lines. I only wrote 10 :)

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=TheRuneKeeper:iconTheRuneKeeper: Oct 9, 2006, 7:12:03 AM
Pnly 10, tut tut lol

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`ryano292:iconryano292: Oct 10, 2006, 5:40:54 AM
it's excellent

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~faceless-n-confused:iconfaceless-n-confused: Feb 4, 2007, 7:50:35 AM
I think this is really beautiful
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